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Re: RC: Far Outtt Forest, With the Kid: Part Four

In a message dated 2/14/00 9:08:52 AM Pacific Standard Time, writes:

<< WHEW, almost done.  Please let me know some of you are reading this.
 Howard >>

I'm reading it, but it's all downhill since the sunbather--you should have 
put her farther into the story. Consider a flashback at this point--or 
perhaps a bored-rider fantasy sequence. 


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